Sry, I deleted the email here because we don't want to post information like that. We can just pm u in the forum or the admin (me) can email u from the email u signed up with.
First of all, thanks for applying we appreciate the support in every way. Just a few pointers for your typesetting. Always use different fonts for expressing the characters thoughts and what they actually say. Next, you always want to center the text and make sure it fits each bubble and if it's not in the bubble you want to look for signs of where it goes. You can even download the raws to see how it should go. Also, I put the completed page at the bottom of the thread so you could see how it looks once it was typeset.
You got the overall point of typesetting, but I think you could practice a bit more. Which we are always willing to work with you, it's how I learned to typeset. I didn't start in a group as a professional...lol! Hope to hear from you.